雅思大作文首段三要素-下-
结尾段要点 要素之一: restatement of your opinion 有的文章在第一段已经表达了作者的观点,那么这种情况,只要在最后一段重申一下就可以了。但是不能照抄一遍!或者将主体段所阐述的分论点(即ideas)的内容总结一下。但是,千万不要在末段的观点与全文的观点矛盾!
有的文章在第一段未明确地表达作者的观点,那么这种情况,就必须在最后一段明确地表达一下观点。
要素之二: offering solutions or recommendations(optional) 有时候雅思题目会要求考生提供对某种现象的解决方法、建议等等,这种情况,就按照题目要求在结尾段分析解决方法或建议等。
注: 首尾段之间一般有一定的呼应,绝对不能自相矛盾。
如:
第一段: many years ago trying to help people with every kind of trouble left me with one sure conviction: in case after case the difficulty could have been overcome — or might never have arisen — if the people involved had just treated one another with common courtesy.
结尾段:in the end, it all comes down to how you regard people — not just people in general, but individuals. life is full of minor irritations and trials and injustices. the only constant, daily effective solution is politeness — which is the golden rule in action.
说明:很明显尾段没有重复首段的内容,但内容是相联系的。